AICE Media Studies AS- Lamb, J

    Mostly what I've been doing this entire week, is just editing my Title & Content page of my magazine. I spent 2 days working on my Title page. I added gold coloring on the left of my title page for all of the words on the left side, just to have it tie into the sunset and all of the same colors throughout my magazine. I added a teaser on the Title page for my feature article, just because I need to correctly advertise the most important idea in the magazine and the overall eye-catcher of the magazine. I moved the year 2021 under the letters TR, and I was going to move down all of the different titles in the dark area, but I realized that it wasn't necessary and it looked better to the left side of the page. In order to attract people, I added a selling line on the front cover of the page. I changed the number "2", to the actual word, "to", just because some people might not understand what I'm trying to say, also the fact that my target audience ...

Jennifer Lamb PEER REVIEW  Some of the feedback that I received from my peers that I thought was nice was tha t there was good coloring throughout the entire magazine, the coloring on the title page looked good, I had nice pictures, a nice minimalistic look,  they liked on my title page the black lines I added to make it look like a runway track,   and  the white color on  the title page pop.  These were  all of  the positive comments that I had from my peers and the teacher.    Other  criticism that I know is necessary to change on my magazine from my peers and teacher is that I have to take the title of my magazine off of the content page, pull the font down on the feature article,  make the font bigger on the feature article, add black lines to the content page,  possibly add gold coloring on the left of my title page, I definitely need to add teasers for the feature article on the title page,  I'll move 2021 to th...